Don't really have anything to say today...so here's a lil piece of me.
My UMMMM!!!
I’d like to take a picture of us in the world
Then cut everything else away.
I’ve etched you in my heart
So we’re never apart
You and I with nothing in between
I want to put myself to sleep with thoughts of you
And wake with you on my mind
I make my home your embrace
My forever in the smile on your face
My soul aches for you
Even when you’re near
Your heart beats softly
And I hear “I love you”
The truest thing I’ve ever heard
Never in a word, but a touch
A glance; romance is in your eyes
Your body doesn’t have enough places to kiss
Even if I were blind not one would I miss
I’ve recorded you like Memorex
Immortalized you on paper
Imprisoned you in my thinking
Your love is for my drinking
And I stagger with every sip
You are personal to me
My private stash of heaven
Forever mine will you be
I take you personally
Tuesday, May 29, 2007
Piece of me....
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18 comments:
Wow...now just who is this mystery man so "etched in (your) heart"????
That was nice...and so sweet! Loved it!
op.d: LOL...dat's my ol jawn...hahahah. I wrote this when I was still effected by him (last night) LOL...sike, but I'd say he's my ummmmmm... (delicious)...hahah...my butter and my pecan...girl don't start me to thinking bout that man; I'll be calling out sick tomorrow...LOL.
miz: thanks lady...I thought I'd go for something nice and light you know.
Finally, a blog featuring some soulful, accessible, unpretentious, real visceral prose. This is your original work, right? Now that's what I'm talkin' 'bout!
anon-nupe: LOL... I ought to pop you for that one...LOL. finally something worth commenting on huh...hahahahah...you're too much, but THANK YOU and yes...RIGHT.
And you think you can't write?
I know everyone interprets things where they are, but I looked at this as a prayer.
Nice.
soj.g: well thank you kindly sir...prayer, funny at a certain time I know it was...indeed. I'd never call consider or even want to be considered as such (a writer); this is just-me-writing in my diary...hahah but I thank you very kindly.
well..that was quite beautiful, ma'am.
thank you sharing a piece of yourself with the world.
Ummmmm = YUMMMMMM - that was GOOD or as we say = GUUiT!! Gon' JMW, GIRL! U are a WRITER - claim IT! just cuz u may not get paid (yet) doesn't make u any less poetic or profound!
dc: well thank you kindly sir...and I don't mind breaking off pieces of me now a then...haha.
cap: YES... Ummmmmm= DELICOUS...hahaha...mouth watering...(ok, I'll stop)hahah. Thank you very much lady.
Love the poem. I appreciate the fact that you havent stopped writting poetry even though you are grown. Thank you for sharing it.
mark: hahahahah...so grown people shouldn't or don't write poetry...hahah or you just messing with ME...lol, well thank you shuga.
That was FANTABULOUS!!! You go girl!!! :-)
Hope you got to enjoy your weekend without the boys!
i like lounging in your language. it always feel sincere and soulful.
Now this little piece of you... What does it taste like? :D :D :D :D :DD :D
ms.b: thank you lady bug...and I sure did have a good time...and I wasn't as bored as I thought I'd be...thank you lady and I hope you enjoyed your's as well
nikki: WHY THANK YOU LADY... I guess it's all I can do, but I KNOW YOU KNOW...lol.
andrew: LOL... you're too much, but didn't you read the Soundtrack of my life post...I called myself "Shuga Mama"...LOL.
Im digging it...
well thank you kindly sir... glad to see you.
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