Saturday, September 29, 2007

Lyrically Affected #5 (More Than A Woman)

Here we go again...Ok, I love this song; these lyrics express how I want to be viewed by a man that I'd share love with. I love all the words, but I've highlighted the ones I'd have written...haha!

"More Than A Woman" (Angie Stone and Calvin Richardson)

Cal, yo baby
I believe it's your time, ha
Uh huh, (with Angie)
Cuz I believe in you
Listen

(Calvin)- Lookin' back, reminiscing on
Caught up really doing bad, then you put me on
Told me not to be ashamed of what I got
Never mind them hatin' niggas up and down the block, babe

(Angie) - Held it down and bills got paid
Said go ahead baby, do ya singing thing
And when God blesses us, I want a Lexus
With a hideaway mansion in the Hamptons

Girl you musta lost your way from heaven
Could it be for me you came so far
Nothing like the ordinary woman
You're the very beat inside my heart


Girl you're like a star I feel so common
Shining like a diamond out in space
Girl you're like my mother, my sister, my lover
Irreplaceable, nothing can take your place

[3] - You're the blood in my veins
You're the air I breathe on a hot summer day
You're like a shirt with no sleeves
What makes me a man, any fool could see
You're more than a woman to me

[4] - If you take that back there would be no cure
I'd sail there forever like a ship with no shore
What makes me a man any fool could see
More than a woman to me


Look at us, livin' in luxury
And I've been thinking maybe we should start a family, oh
A girl for you and a boy for me
Matching stones, set baguettes, would you marry me baby

And if you'll have me I'd gladly give my life
Today I take this vow to make you my wife
Nothing temporary
No it's quite contrary
It's you and me for eternity

Boy you musta lost your way from heaven
Could it be for me you came so far
Nothing like the ordinary brother
You're the very beat inside my heart

Boy you're like a star I feel so common
Shining like a diamond out in space
Something like my father, my brother, my lover
Irreplaceable, nothing can take your place

If you're certain about it, oh yeah
Baby, you're the essence of my life
Wanna make you my wife, yeah baby
Oh Lord, baby I love you
My my my baby
My my my baby, yeah yeah
Said you're my baby
Whoa yeah
I know there was something about you
Girl I love you


Yeah, I know I've highlighted pretty much the whole song, but come on now...that's some serious love on paper...ummm... MAGIC!!! Ok, here's the song...enjoy.

8 comments:

The Second Sixty-Eight said...

Sounds like somebody is in looovvveeee!

JustMeWriting said...

HAHAHAHAH... WHO ME??? NOT, I just love this song and was listening to it...the lyrics are wonderful to me; that's how I'd want my mr. right to see me, as his everything...the air that he breaths.

See...just words! lol

GC said...

love is beautiful
very nice pick

nikki said...

i love your lyrics way more than the original ones. you go girl! you should be writing lyrics for a living!

GurlNexxDoor said...

Love it, especially the improvements!

JustMeWriting said...

OOOPPPSSS...GUESS I MESSED UP ANOTHER POST...HAHAHAH. WHEN I SAID THE ONES I'D HAVE WRTTEN I MEANT I FELT THOSE WORDS SOOOO MUCH, THAT I COULD HAVE WRITTEN THEM MYSELF...LOL.

DAG, this is like the second time I've done this in a week...hahahah.. SORRY GUYS, BUT THANKS NIKKY FOR THE COMP'S. (I'LL TAKE THEM ANYWAY)!

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