Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Piece of me....

Don't really have anything to say today...so here's a lil piece of me.


My UMMMM!!!


I’d like to take a picture of us in the world
Then cut everything else away.

I’ve etched you in my heart
So we’re never apart
You and I with nothing in between

I want to put myself to sleep with thoughts of you
And wake with you on my mind

I make my home your embrace
My forever in the smile on your face

My soul aches for you
Even when you’re near

Your heart beats softly
And I hear “I love you”

The truest thing I’ve ever heard
Never in a word, but a touch
A glance; romance is in your eyes

Your body doesn’t have enough places to kiss
Even if I were blind not one would I miss

I’ve recorded you like Memorex
Immortalized you on paper

Imprisoned you in my thinking
Your love is for my drinking
And I stagger with every sip

You are personal to me
My private stash of heaven
Forever mine will you be
I take you personally

18 comments:

Opinionated Diva said...

Wow...now just who is this mystery man so "etched in (your) heart"????

Mizrepresent said...

That was nice...and so sweet! Loved it!

JustMeWriting said...

op.d: LOL...dat's my ol jawn...hahahah. I wrote this when I was still effected by him (last night) LOL...sike, but I'd say he's my ummmmmm... (delicious)...hahah...my butter and my pecan...girl don't start me to thinking bout that man; I'll be calling out sick tomorrow...LOL.

miz: thanks lady...I thought I'd go for something nice and light you know.

anonymousnupe said...

Finally, a blog featuring some soulful, accessible, unpretentious, real visceral prose. This is your original work, right? Now that's what I'm talkin' 'bout!

JustMeWriting said...

anon-nupe: LOL... I ought to pop you for that one...LOL. finally something worth commenting on huh...hahahahah...you're too much, but THANK YOU and yes...RIGHT.

Sojourner G said...

And you think you can't write?
I know everyone interprets things where they are, but I looked at this as a prayer.

Nice.

JustMeWriting said...

soj.g: well thank you kindly sir...prayer, funny at a certain time I know it was...indeed. I'd never call consider or even want to be considered as such (a writer); this is just-me-writing in my diary...hahah but I thank you very kindly.

dc_speaks said...

well..that was quite beautiful, ma'am.

thank you sharing a piece of yourself with the world.

CapCity said...

Ummmmm = YUMMMMMM - that was GOOD or as we say = GUUiT!! Gon' JMW, GIRL! U are a WRITER - claim IT! just cuz u may not get paid (yet) doesn't make u any less poetic or profound!

JustMeWriting said...

dc: well thank you kindly sir...and I don't mind breaking off pieces of me now a then...haha.

cap: YES... Ummmmmm= DELICOUS...hahaha...mouth watering...(ok, I'll stop)hahah. Thank you very much lady.

mark said...

Love the poem. I appreciate the fact that you havent stopped writting poetry even though you are grown. Thank you for sharing it.

JustMeWriting said...

mark: hahahahah...so grown people shouldn't or don't write poetry...hahah or you just messing with ME...lol, well thank you shuga.

Ms. Behaving said...

That was FANTABULOUS!!! You go girl!!! :-)
Hope you got to enjoy your weekend without the boys!

nikki said...

i like lounging in your language. it always feel sincere and soulful.

Andrew The Asshole said...

Now this little piece of you... What does it taste like? :D :D :D :D :DD :D

JustMeWriting said...

ms.b: thank you lady bug...and I sure did have a good time...and I wasn't as bored as I thought I'd be...thank you lady and I hope you enjoyed your's as well

nikki: WHY THANK YOU LADY... I guess it's all I can do, but I KNOW YOU KNOW...lol.

andrew: LOL... you're too much, but didn't you read the Soundtrack of my life post...I called myself "Shuga Mama"...LOL.

Ray said...

Im digging it...

JustMeWriting said...

well thank you kindly sir... glad to see you.